Kia ora,Bitner and Jiraiya here and were in room 24, we really like your blog post about your Wolf story.We remember when we did writing like this last term. Have you ever tried posting up pictures. Thanks for sharing your learning with us. You should check out our blogs on the school website, press on room 24. 😎😎 Blog You Later Bitner and jiraiya
Hi Irae my name is Zion-LI from Room 22. You have very described the wolf and how creative you are. What else can you write? Blog ya later here's a Link to my bloghttp://odszion-li.blogspot.com/2018/01/welcome.html
Kia orana Irae, my name is Ileana from room 24. I really like your blog post about Annie's challenge. I haven't done this but it looks really fun and I would like to try it!
Is there anything you found fun or challenging? thanks for sharing your learning you should check out my blog at http://odsileanad.blogspot.com/ blog you later!
thank's for the feed back and there was something challenging it was using all of those words to make story . I'll try fixing up my sentences next time.blog ya later😎😎
Hi my name is James and I'm in Room 22. I think you should write a bit more and post a bit more so people can comment a bit more. But it's good. Here is a link to my blog http://odsjamesm.blogspot.com/ Blog you later 🐢🐢🐢👌👌😂😂 BYE
Hello my name is hazel and this is a great post is there a moral behind this story? maybe next time you could add in some color . dont forget to check out my blog at https://odshazel.blogspot.com/ blog you later .Hazel.
Great story Irae. I like your use of speech marks. What did you find fun or challenging about this challenge? Keep up the blogging!
ReplyDeleteKia ora,Bitner and Jiraiya here and were in room 24, we really like your blog post about your Wolf story.We remember when we did writing like this last term. Have you ever tried posting up pictures. Thanks for sharing your learning with us. You should check out our blogs on the school website, press on room 24.
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Blog You Later Bitner and jiraiya
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ReplyDeleteHi Irae my name is Zion-LI from Room 22. You have very described the wolf and how creative you are. What else can you write? Blog ya later here's a Link to my bloghttp://odszion-li.blogspot.com/2018/01/welcome.html
ReplyDeleteKia orana Irae, my name is Ileana from room 24. I really like your blog post about Annie's challenge. I haven't done this but it looks really fun and I would like to try it!
ReplyDeleteIs there anything you found fun or challenging?
thanks for sharing your learning you should check out my blog
at http://odsileanad.blogspot.com/ blog you later!
thank's for the feed back and there was something challenging it was using all of those words to make story . I'll try fixing up my sentences next time.blog ya later😎😎
DeleteHi my name is James and I'm in Room 22. I think you should write a bit more and post a bit more so people can comment a bit more. But it's good. Here is a link to my blog http://odsjamesm.blogspot.com/ Blog you later 🐢🐢🐢👌👌😂😂 BYE
ReplyDeleteHello my name is hazel and this is a great post is there a moral behind this story? maybe next time you could add in some color .
ReplyDeletedont forget to check out my blog at
https://odshazel.blogspot.com/
blog you later
.Hazel.
Hello my name is Kylah from room 7 i really liked your blog post alot. Mqybe next time can you check your spelling please see you later
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